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And thats when you know
Thats when you know the fire is hidden
When you know that they whisper in your ear
You know they pull the strings and laugh at night
Know the vicious poison from the nymphs mouth

But continue
Wishing to feel the touch again
the heat of the kiss
the scent of cigarettes they never lit
To feel the body warming aginst the skin

A torture you cant call torture
Because you are the one who stays far away
only with a ghost hand touching your face
the real one, stays in place, because of you

Oh the ghost
Remnent of flesh
Pass me again
Oh the ghost
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~Probrad:iconProbrad: Jun 8, 2008, 2:23:42 PM Mood: Mesmerized
It's a good piece of work; escellent imagery. I especially enjoy the fact of how it's written to be so universal; There's something in here for everyone to relate to.

Great work!
~Sonadowlover1:iconSonadowlover1: Jun 8, 2008, 6:25:22 PM
deep favin this

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We live we cry, we burn we die
~xlostandfoundx:iconxlostandfoundx: Jun 9, 2008, 6:55:57 AM
thank you =]

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Come on heart, speak up
~xlostandfoundx:iconxlostandfoundx: Jun 9, 2008, 6:58:31 AM
thank you =]
I like it when people look beneath the surface of a work, good insight =]

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Come on heart, speak up
~aycia:iconaycia: Jun 12, 2008, 1:42:56 AM
just the word cigarettes put into that context is amazing.
i love it absolutely.

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The earth
will see
our eyes
go blank, tonight.
~xlostandfoundx:iconxlostandfoundx: Jun 12, 2008, 10:10:28 AM
mucho gracies =]

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Come on heart, speak up
~aycia:iconaycia: Jun 12, 2008, 10:28:56 PM
lol you're welcome

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The earth
will see
our eyes
go blank, tonight.
*bbelill:iconbbelill: Jun 29, 2008, 8:23:59 AM
this is amazing, great job my friend

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Ceade mile failte

Come away! O, human child!
To the woods and waters wild,
With a fairy hand in hand,
For the world's more full of weeping than
you can understand-W.B. Yeats :icongeekflirt:
~xlostandfoundx:iconxlostandfoundx: Jul 9, 2008, 12:05:41 AM
thank you. anything inparticular you liked? make you think about anything?

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Come on heart, speak up
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